tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3079607910157191815.post6632738492624483063..comments2012-10-24T12:06:48.033-07:00Comments on Notes From the Stable: Getting OutAsproullahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10495411522653521782noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3079607910157191815.post-8774671957831095512012-05-15T09:25:30.301-07:002012-05-15T09:25:30.301-07:00Thanks for your feedback, Stephanie. Was there an...Thanks for your feedback, Stephanie. Was there any particular place that you were thinking of to tighten up, or to reduce description all over?Asproullahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10495411522653521782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3079607910157191815.post-77045381954053780422012-05-12T11:32:59.964-07:002012-05-12T11:32:59.964-07:00Great story. The tension builds nicely as you gath...Great story. The tension builds nicely as you gather everyone together and people make decisions. As for constructive criticism, tighten it up a bit. There's some description you could get rid of to allow it to flow more easily. You have the power of storytelling on your side. A bit of editing and we would not be able to put it down.Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3079607910157191815.post-19568200395220979522012-05-12T06:40:12.266-07:002012-05-12T06:40:12.266-07:00Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and your...Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and your uplifting,positive comment. I love your story. Great job!Debra Gray-Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13836657468924341727noreply@blogger.com